SRL Archive - English/L.O.T.E

http://pastebin.com/6H2p0pXh


Let me know how my paper is. Any recommendations on how to improve it?

I like it actually
Does the teacher look for punctuation/capitalization?

Just saw 'JAva' at the last paragraph, minor, but everything else was good and a good read :)

…but JAva has stood the test of time and has changed my life, and hopefully will change other peoples lives as well.

Some parts don't really read that easy. I made a few suggestions. I hope you use Word.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/88974267/John%20Hamlett2.doc

From: THE MAYOR
Some parts don't really read that easy. I made a few suggestions. I hope you use Word.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/88974267/John%20Hamlett2.doc

True, at some points it was not very east to read. I would of worded some things differently, but I think Mayor summed it up nicely. ;)

Mayor, have you considered becoming a teacher?

i disagree, C++ has stood the test of time :)

From: xtrapsp
Mayor, have you considered becoming a teacher?

I teach at university :)

From: THE MAYOR
I teach at university :)

That'd be why ;)

From: The Mayor
I teach at university :)

Any hint at what university?

No sorry :p

From: The Mayor
No sorry :p

You must be one of those younger teachers… please don't reply- it'd be weird if you were old.

From: Joseph D
You must be one of those younger teachers… please don't reply- it'd be weird if you were old.

Lol why would it be weird? :P

It was a good read. There was one or two run on sentences and a few commas here and there that should be added/removed. I'm sure The Mayor fixed them up.