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I actually wrote this.


taigastyle

2007-04-13 04:46:12

Its for school.

But given theres a section I might as well post it, Its supposed to be a Shakespearian Sonnet. Give me a rating

Anyway, for all those who care.

Here is my sonnet. And no, it is not actually for anyone.



Letting Go.
By Taigastyle

Those delightful, blissful moments we shared
Those moments in life which had no despair
To nothing else could our love be compared
To say it would end now, no one would dare

We said forever, you can not deny
I wish you would tell me, why did you leave?
I wanted a chance, just to say goodbye
But why you left, I still can not perceive

Was it something else? Just someone better?
What could it have been, Looks? Money? Power?
When away, would he write you a letter
If you were in trouble would he cower?

All this clutter will be erased by dawn
I now know I must surrender what’s gone


No copying.

Phade

2007-07-01 00:32:14

Very Deep… A Fallen Feeling to it. Much of it penetrates your mind with the truth, because many of us know where you are coming from. Keep on writing, you are strong in it.

crossback7

2007-07-04 02:22:33

Don't bump three-month-old threads. . .Reply to someone who just posted something. Such as my sucky story :P

Tim0suprem0

2007-07-06 00:09:46

For a leecher, this is pretty damn good.

I B X R

2007-09-03 19:01:26

Wowy, nice

Mr.Klean

2007-09-03 20:23:19

Don't gravedig

07-05-2007, 11:09 PM

neG

2007-10-05 11:45:52

From: mr.klean
Don't gravedig

07-05-2007, 11:09 PM


Speak up, I have bad hearing.

Home

2009-06-17 02:55:41

Great poem and i don't care if someone says that this is grave dig.. This is deep mate and good one :)

~Home

Shuttleu

2009-06-17 03:16:45

From: Home
Great poem and i don't care if someone says that this is grave dig.. This is deep mate and good one :)

~Home

+1
and like Tim0suprem0 said

for a leecher this is very good
well done although i dont think he will ever read it :p

~shut