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I feel as though
My heart will shortly break.
I feel as though
My mind will soon shutdown.
I feel as though
My whole life you will take.
But I still don’t want to see your harsh frown.

I have loved you with everything I could,
I know you have so wholly loved me too.

Yet this is the last
Time I ever would, hold
You tightly and
Be happy with you.

Memories of you are filled to the brim,
So I’ll never forget the time we spent.

It makes my future
Seem so grim, with-
Out you there and
What you meant.

Hopefully fate will treat you well.
I suppose only time will tell.

Although not titled for this, it will most likely be my last poem in a long time.

Awe, I really liked the poems. I will be waiting for more when you decide to do them again though.

But of course you will be staying at SRL! For a LONG TIME! Right?

Oo i thought this was a goodbye thread. Good poem, glad your staying :)

I'm not sure - I'll probably lose interest when I get a life.

From: mixster
I'm not sure - I'll probably lose interest when I get a life.

Oooooh but that'll never happen :p

EDIT: I mean losing interest, not getting a life lol :redface:

I hate poetry, but I really liked that poem. Anyone can most likely relate it to their life. Did you write that from what you were feeling, or just thought of it?

Yup - it's based on something that's going on now. I did think it was quite a common theme in lives originally, so I did try to tailor it a bit more specifically.

oh

when I read it, it actually made me feel emotions lol.