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poetry


be right bak

2007-01-22 16:31:02

rate my poem!!! scale of 1 thru 10 plz:cool: :cool: :cool:

poetry is but a thought
something that can be bught
even if you got a penny
it might be plenty
for poetry is but a thought

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cool ppl do poems:cool: :cool: :cool: :cool:
just like bart!:bart:

Ruroken

2007-01-31 15:18:00

penny dosent ryme with plenty. Thats the only real fault i can find.

WhoCares357

2007-01-31 17:39:51

He also spelled bought wrong. Overall maybe 5/10 (so short)

legendaryhero90

2007-02-02 22:53:41

From: WhoCares357
He also spelled bought wrong. Overall maybe 5/10 (so short)


my english teacher would never accept that!!
1/10
grade: F-

:duh: