SRL Archive - English/L.O.T.E

I would appreciate it if someone/s would be able to proof what I have done with my lab report. It's still just a working draft, and only 15 pages of 20-25, but any errors caught early would be great.
Keep in mind this isn't an english essay, so not every tiny detail is huge, just aim for the bigguns.
Any suggestions would be great.

http://rapidshare.com/files/302220242/lab_write_up__WOOD.docx

thanks guys.

edit: sorry I couldn't attach it, I just want to go to bed…sorry for crappy RS link

wooow

THIS CRAP IS THE GREATEST MOTHERLOVING STUFF EVER I SWEAR TO GOD MY EYES ARE BLEEDING RIGHT NOW I KID YOU NOT MY EYES ARE BLEEDING FROM THE AWESOME.

do you want grammar fix?

yeah, grammar stuff the Word doesn't catch would be awesome if you could read through what I got.
and thanks for compliment Ruroken, I didn't think this would be so well received ;) if you catch my drift.