3Garrett3
2009-10-28 15:44:47
Is a sonnet again, I don't really like it as much as my other ones, but I picked a subject that wasn't as easy to write about :\
As always, feedback and such is appreciated.
I just tried to do what I thought was right,
just needed some time to collect some thoughts.
You think that I've done it just out of spite.
Those efforts to explain were all for naught.
You seem to think it came easy to me.
Choices like this aren't easy to make.
I've tried to explain, but still you don't see.
How many more tries with explaining take?
You said your goodbyes, said "have a nice life"
but without you, my life just can't be good.
There's no one around to finish this strife,
You don't think I've tried? You misunderstood.
I'm sorry, though it means nothing to you,
these words, in my mind, are long overdue.
As always, feedback and such is appreciated.
I just tried to do what I thought was right,
just needed some time to collect some thoughts.
You think that I've done it just out of spite.
Those efforts to explain were all for naught.
You seem to think it came easy to me.
Choices like this aren't easy to make.
I've tried to explain, but still you don't see.
How many more tries with explaining take?
You said your goodbyes, said "have a nice life"
but without you, my life just can't be good.
There's no one around to finish this strife,
You don't think I've tried? You misunderstood.
I'm sorry, though it means nothing to you,
these words, in my mind, are long overdue.