SRL Archive - Graphics and Multimedia

begin
ConstructiveCritisism := 'Make the text and the spirals and the dude blend in to the background a bit more.';
Wait(500);
Writeln('7/10!');
end.

From: bionicle1800
begin
ConstructiveCritisism := 'Make the text and the spirals and the dude blend in to the background a bit more.';
Wait(500);
Writeln('7/10!');
end.

Nub, doesn't compile.

Is it just one big c4d and a render and text?

It looks pretty simple but it's a good start.

If you make the c4d look more like your render, and add some blending, it will look much better. The text kinda stands out too much. I'm a fan of simple text.

If you used a different c4d/background, I think it would fit better with the colourful render.

The spirals are the pen tool, the c4d is a, well c4d. I needed a dark background to bring out the glow, and that was one of the only colors that worked for the glow but didn't mess with the render

From: 3Garrett3
Nub, doesn't compile.

program thingy;

procedure Critisism;
begin
  Wait(500+ random(30));
  Writeln('Make the text and the spirals and the dude blend in to the background a bit more.');
  Wait(500+ random(30));
  Writeln('7/10!');
end;

begin
  ClearDebug;
  Critisism;
end.

how bout now

From: bionicle1800

program thingy;

procedure Critisism;
begin
  Wait(500+ random(30));
  Writeln('Make the text and the spirals and the dude blend in to the background a bit more.');
  Wait(500+ random(30))
  Writeln('7/10!');
end;

begin
  ClearDebug;
  Critisism;
end.

how bout now

Your forgot a semicolon

From: MylesMadness
Your forgot a semicolon

oh snap! edited :p

fail @ updates making my scar all laggy :(

Colored http://planetrenders.net/renders/displayimage.php?pos=-17179 with render on it :).

I will hate ! Except for your pen tooling :)

Pen tooling looks good.
Rest is kinda… simple…
BTW Bionicle you still missed a S-C ;)

From: The Man
Pen tooling looks good.
Rest is kinda… simple…
BTW Bionicle you still missed a S-C ;)

no. look at my original post :p not the quote, i edit it in lol

Had a diffren't background, but was extremely ugly