SRL Archive - Graphics and Multimedia

Colors don't match, I fail at grundging, at smudging, at blending…

Well here is the atrocity.


Tried out a new border style.

Rate in % or /10. As you like ^^.

I guess by this silence what you think of it…

I don't think it's that bad. Perhaps blend the red and gold into the smoke a bit more though.

From: R1ch
I don't think it's that bad. Perhaps blend the red and gold into the smoke a bit more though.

It is, look at newbiezkid or ToF or NiCbaZ or Zyt3x's posts soon (if they) post. And you will get why it sucks :p.

Thanks for your tip, although I thought I had…

Haha with that attitude you wont get far ;)
I think it's good, really, I do but as you said; the colors doesn't match that good, and do I see some empty space there? What did master newbiez/ToF/NiCbaZ (can't remember who lol -.-) say about that? ;)
I like how you used the same colors as the render (I suppose you copyed it and did some blur + editing and the overlay?)

Keep it up! :)

1. Too Plain, add something and/or crop.

2. Try to beat it criticism rather than just linger on it.

3. Pretend you are making this for Mr.Fawka

maybe a little less gray, it's iron man so i'd say a background with maybe a dark red with some dark yellow, or darker gold, and maybe use a few more brushes to spice it up a bit. overall it is pretty good but i think you could make it a lot better.

I dont really like the kind of shadow thing you were trying to do around iron man. But I like the other smoke stuff.

Cant seem to find this atrocity all i see is a pretty nice signature (seems a bit empty though) also quite annoying me posting on itouch (keep pressing wrong letters) its far from being an atrocity though :)

You say yourself that you sig is really bad yet you say "just wait till Newbiezkid or ToF posts and they will tell me everything wrong with it"…

So are you just fishing comments or do you want some criticism?

From: newbiezkid
You say yourself that you sig is really bad yet you say "just wait till Newbiezkid or ToF posts and they will tell me everything wrong with it"…

So are you just fishing comments or do you want some criticism?

I'm sure you've got some. Make it constructive though, and I will be happy ;)

DDD, I don't like the shadow behind his head, it looks too solid to be a shadow, but too faded to do much. I like the smoke though. Just spice it up some :)

From: Dr D. Dervish
Colors don't match, I fail at grundging, at smudging, at blending…

Well here is the atrocity.


Tried out a new border style.

Rate in % or /10. As you like ^^.

I guess by this silence what you think of it…

It looks ok, not bad just needs some work on the blending.

From: Zyt3x
Haha with that attitude you wont get far ;)
I think it's good, really, I do but as you said; the colors doesn't match that good, and do I see some empty space there? What did master newbiez/ToF/NiCbaZ (can't remember who lol -.-) say about that? ;)
I like how you used the same colors as the render (I suppose you copyed it and did some blur + editing and the overlay?)

Keep it up! :)

Thanks ! Well yes you're right for the colors around the render, well its smudging xD.

From: mcnollend
maybe a little less gray, it's iron man so i'd say a background with maybe a dark red with some dark yellow, or darker gold, and maybe use a few more brushes to spice it up a bit. overall it is pretty good but i think you could make it a lot better.

Hmm ok, I agree its a little plain and needs some more stuff… I did a really colorful and sexy one of it first !

Problem again : colors didn't fit with the render.

From: noidea
I dont really like the kind of shadow thing you were trying to do around iron man. But I like the other smoke stuff.

Ok :).

From: Kave
Cant seem to find this atrocity all i see is a pretty nice signature (seems a bit empty though) also quite annoying me posting on itouch (keep pressing wrong letters) its far from being an atrocity though :)

Thanks for your comment, it is empty, need to fill it up some way.

From: newbiezkid
You say yourself that you sig is really bad yet you say "just wait till Newbiezkid or ToF posts and they will tell me everything wrong with it"…

So are you just fishing comments or do you want some criticism?

I was fishing comments, but critiscism ! I love when you guys critiscise in a constructive way :).

From: 3Garrett3
I'm sure you've got some. Make it constructive though, and I will be happy ;)

DDD, I don't like the shadow behind his head, it looks too solid to be a shadow, but too faded to do much. I like the smoke though. Just spice it up some :)

It's an attempt to blend the render in >.< Guess it failed :p.

Thanks :).

From: NiCbaZ
It looks ok, not bad just needs some work on the blending.

Hmm, ok. I would like to know, should I airbrush erase around the borders of the renders to blend them in ?

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Making a very colorful sig next project.

Project is meant to be life.

Yet life is dark and obscure, but it can be shiny and happy…

Thanks for all the comments :).

It's good for a beginner at smudging.

From: Torrent of Flame
It's good for a beginner at smudging.

Really ? Thanks !

Well I tried to follow a tutorial, and my outcome was faaaaar from what the tut maker got.

I really like the border :)
If you made the renders face a bit more sharp it would look a lot better IMO ;)

T~M