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o so me and my band mate ended up writing two versions of the same song


so what i need from you guys is to vote on which song is better


number 1

Look down this road
See where we’ve been
rewrite this story
I want you again

My heart is due to you
you reject It I turn blue
without a warning
you take this away

Don’t wanna give up
Together we are strong
Love lasts forever
Never say never

I rise and fall for you
I live and die for you
Your all I want
Your everything I’m not

Who would have guessed
That I was blessed
Like the angels
That soar so high

Love can be painful
But it turns around
trust me on this one
Ill make it right

I rise and fall for you
I live and die for you
Your all I want
Your everything I’m not

I rise and fall for you
I live and die for you
Your all I want
Your everything I’m not

While I try and sleep
I see how lucky I am
You gave it one last try
Together forever

Ill hold you tight
All my life
Just promise me one thing
You’ll stay by my side

I rise and fall for you
I live and die for you
Your all I want
Your everything I’m not

number 2

Look down this road 4 A
See where we’ve been, 4 B
Let’s rewrite this story 6 C
I want you again 5 A


My heart is due to you 5 A
When you reject It 5 B
I feel it turn blue 5 A
without any warning 5 C
You made my life boring 6 C

Don’t want to give up 5 A
Together we’re strong 5 B
Love lasts forever 5 C
Never say never 5 C

I rise and fall for you 6 A
I live and die for you 6 B
Your all I want cause 5 C
Your everything I’m not 5 C
(pause)
I love you 3 D

Who would have guessed 4 A
That I was blessed 5 A
Like the angels 4 B
That soar so high 4 C
I need another try 6 C

Love can be painful 5 A
But it turns around 5 B
trust me on this one 5 C
Ill set it straight 4 D
Just you wait 3 D

I rise and fall for you 6 A
I live and die for you 6 B
Your all I want cause 5 C
Your everything I’m not 5 C
(pause)
I love you 3 D


While I try and sleep 5 A
I see how lucky I am 6 B
You gave it one last try 6 C
Together forever 6 D

note id dont think any of them could be called done yet they still have some work but hey vote on which one

I like the first one better, just just flows better IMO. :)

Numero dos amigo.

first :)

heres the most up to date version of the song tell me what you guys think

Look down this road
See where we’ve been
rewrite this story
I want you again

My heart is due to you
you reject It I turn blue
we had ambition
then we falied this mission

Don’t wanna give up
Together we are strong
Love lasts forever
Never say never

I rise and fall for you
I live and die for you
Your all I wanted
Your everything I’m not

Who would have guessed
That I was blessed
Like the angels
That soar so h-i-g-h
that i called you m-i-n-e

Love can be painful
But it turns around
trust me on this one
don’t make a sound

While I try and sleep
I see how lucky I am
You gave it one last try
Together forever

Ill hold you tight
All my life
Just promise me one thing
You’ll stay by my side

I rise and fall for you
I live and die for you
Your all I want
Your everything I’m not

Who would have guessed
That I was blessed
Like the angels
That soar so h-i-g-h
that i called you m-i-n-e

you say you want me
but thats a lie
I give you my heart 
and you make me cry

(4 liner)

Look down this road
See where we’ve been
rewrite this story
I dont want you again

that 4 liner is one that we havnt writen yet