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1/4 done poem


Naike

2009-06-05 11:33:05

Need all feedback I can possibly get on this one.


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I wave at the good days as I won't see them for a while.
And I welcome the sad days without you here by my side.
The picture of me without you hurts, but it was all my fault.
My fault that I lost you right infront of my eyes, I tried to keep
calm and it went Ok, but inside I was turning into one big massacre.
At first it was cool, I could focus on my priorities but now I
can't even think no more. I try to focus but it just reminds
me even more.

Now I'm sitting here, more stuck then ever thinking of what I could have done to change this so called situation.

Simtoon

2009-06-05 17:15:35

Sounds like an experince