SRL Archive - Graphics and Multimedia

First Signature!


Dynamite

2009-05-29 19:51:12

Hi guys,
this is my first ever try at a GFX signature.


Rate and feedback please :)

T~M

Dervish

2009-05-29 20:36:56

Ugly render as fuck.

Too bright on the upper right side.

Text does ABSOLUTELY not match.

Needs a border :

Adding a border :

Create a new layer and press "D". Then press : CTRL + A. Go into edit > stroke.

And use the settings as :

Foreground color 2 px, inside.

You should have a nice border by then…


Rating :

7/10… NO ! 3.5/10 for the unbalanced render, but yet 5/10 since its your first :).

ShowerThoughts

2009-05-29 21:01:51

It's flat.

Dervish

2009-05-29 21:03:58

From: Hermen
It's flat.


Are you hermpie ?

And what do you mean by flat ?

ShowerThoughts

2009-05-29 21:14:33

The woman is flat. 1 dimension.
It's like an 1 mm thick paper.

Blender

2009-05-29 23:01:49

Hermen?
You DO mean 2 dimensional, right?

I also think it is flat.

Blender makes 2D look 3D!

NiCbaZ

2009-05-30 03:58:38


7/10… NO ! 3.5/10 for the unbalanced render, but yet 5/10 since its your first .


Just because its his first siggy, i should not effect the rating.

Overall it looks horrible.

2/10

NCDS

2009-05-30 04:04:32

Don't take criticism too seriously.

Alot of people here are really full of themselves and it would seem they get off on telling people they're no good at something.

bullzeye95

2009-05-30 04:28:32

From: NCDS
Don't take criticism too seriously.

Alot of people here are really full of themselves and it would seem they get off on telling people they're no good at something.


He asked for feedback. If someone gives criticism, that doesn't mean they're full of themselves or jerks.

NiCbaZ

2009-05-30 06:46:09

From: NCDS
Don't take criticism too seriously.

Alot of people here are really full of themselves and it would seem they get off on telling people they're no good at something.


What you want me to lie? I should of said why i don't like it etc but i had to go to soccer :/


The render looks really bad with the sig. Try a few tutorials

Mystic

2009-05-30 07:55:18

It's pretty good for his first! Take is easy.
4/10
But I agree the render is a little flat. Try Planet Renders ;)

NCDS

2009-05-30 09:53:20

From: bullzeye95
He asked for feedback. If someone gives criticism, that doesn't mean they're full of themselves or jerks.

No, but some people are a bit more blunt then they need to be.

From: NiCbaZ
What you want me to lie? I should of said why i don't like it etc but i had to go to soccer :/

No, I don't want you to lie, but yes, you should have said why otherwise it is not even worth posting "no". I know you don't mean it in a harsh way, but 'The Man' is a new member and he may not.

I have nothing against anybody or anything, I just don't want people to get discouraged from what they are doing.

Gu3st...

2009-05-30 10:50:15

From: NiCbaZ
What you want me to lie?

You could easily said it in a nicer tone.

The Man: It is not that bad, is this your first signature or your first try at photoshop? (no offence! But if this is your first try at photoshop then I'd say its a great piece of work ;))
I do not like the small bright "orbs" that are white and green-ish.. they do not fit in with the color of your chosen render, and try to not to crop the render as much as you have done here, it makes it look a bit ugly :P

Dynamite

2009-05-30 21:24:28

It is my first try at photoshop. And Penguin I did get that render from Planet Renders.

I followed an online tutorial with the same render and effects as him and I think this one came out quite well.
And i like criticism :)

T~M

Dervish

2009-05-30 21:41:40

From: The Man
It is my first try at photoshop. And Penguin I did get that render from Planet Renders.

I followed an online tutorial with the same render and effects as him and I think this one came out quite well.
And i like criticism :)

T~M


You still have the .psd ? Save as .png, shit quality on that one seriously.

As long as I can't see whats done really I'll give it a 2.

Dynamite

2009-05-30 22:22:26

No what .psd?
I saved then closed…
then uploaded to tinypic

T~M

Dervish

2009-05-30 23:01:57

The .psd is the editable photshop format.

Dynamite

2009-05-30 23:05:00

Oh ok… umm dont think so sorry.. :(

T~M

Torrent of Flame

2009-05-30 23:26:03

Ah, Im not being funny here but The Man, you started out alot better than that of what Dervish did, so you know mate, keep up the work.

Atleast I can see you trying to experiment about with lots of different things. Keep up the work and you will learn more and more anyway.

Smartzkid

2009-05-31 00:13:57

I think the character is too blurred on the second one.

Gu3st...

2009-05-31 01:48:50

From: Torrent of Flame
Ah, Im not being funny here but The Man, you started out alot better than that of what Dervish did, so you know mate, keep up the work.

Atleast I can see you trying to experiment about with lots of different things. Keep up the work and you will learn more and more anyway.

I agree, The Man, Keep experimenting and you will get to Dr D Dervish's level in no time :)

Dervish

2009-05-31 02:02:48

Shit level in other words :).

Gu3st...

2009-05-31 03:09:15

From: Dr D. Dervish
Shit level in other words :).

Pffft don't be silly, I love your skills!

P1nky

2009-05-31 11:42:36

i like it, though the girl tbh is quite not good image and its quite hard to like uhmmm understand the picture due to being really blurry. Though for first timer 8/10. gl

Floor66

2009-05-31 13:32:33

8/10 is way overrated even for first one IMO.
I don't rate sigs by first, second, or heck: tenth! I rate them in general.
This is a 2/10 at its highest.

^IMO^

GoF

2009-06-01 21:40:08

Seen way worse first/second sigs, so not bad at all, gl.

From: NCDS
Don't take criticism too seriously.

Alot of people here are really full of themselves and it would seem they get off on telling people they're no good at something.


True dat. Funny thing is that most of the people would get pretty harsh criticism on some GFX focused sites (atleast with an arrogant attitude), but as people aren't that much into graphics here they can gladly act like they're the fucking reincarnation of Picasso or something…

By the by, the above not directed at anyone here, but just generally about the people that have that "im a photoshop gawd now after reading the 1st chapter of photoshop for dummies and making a few forum signatures *hyuk hyuk hyuk*" attitude. I don't really find sigs too impressive at all, anyone can make awesome ones by just following tuts (and many people even find those 3 minute projects with just a background and a image and some text slammed there awesome :p).

Torrent of Flame

2009-06-01 23:11:31

From: GoF
Seen way worse first/second sigs, so not bad at all, gl.



True dat. Funny thing is that most of the people would get pretty harsh criticism on some GFX focused sites (atleast with an arrogant attitude), but as people aren't that much into graphics here they can gladly act like they're the fucking reincarnation of Picasso or something…

By the by, the above not directed at anyone here, but just generally about the people that have that "im a photoshop gawd now after reading the 1st chapter of photoshop for dummies and making a few forum signatures *hyuk hyuk hyuk*" attitude. I don't really find sigs too impressive at all, anyone can make awesome ones by just following tuts (and many people even find those 3 minute projects with just a background and a image and some text slammed there awesome :p).


+1. And I could easily direct it at a few people, what you are saying. The thing is around here not many people know what's what in PS, let alone having it. Only a few people can offer critique here and that is people who look deeper than 'LOLOL ITS SHIT I CN TOTALLY DO BETTER IN PAINTZ'

People also forget everyone starts somewhere, and atleast someone is trying to make a start.

Dervish

2009-06-02 00:32:05

From: Torrent of Flame
+1. And I could easily direct it at a few people, what you are saying. The thing is around here not many people know what's what in PS, let alone having it. Only a few people can offer critique here and that is people who look deeper than 'LOLOL ITS SHIT I CN TOTALLY DO BETTER IN PAINTZ'

People also forget everyone starts somewhere, and atleast someone is trying to make a start.


Aimed towards me ?

Torrent of Flame

2009-06-02 00:39:48

Probably.