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Once a day, for a week.


Naike

2009-05-16 04:01:27

For a week I will be posting poetry, starting now.
They will be in my siggy on the day they are posted as well.

Day 1,


~N

Look into my eyes, and tell me what you see..
I see a reflection of something unreal, something sweet.
Is it for real, or is it just another dream?

Kave

2009-05-16 05:37:24

i like this mind if i steal it :p?

Naike

2009-05-16 18:58:35

Go ahead, as long you don't post it and claim it yours.

Day 2,

~N

I would like to talk to you, just for a while.
Hopefully I can explain how i feel, and why.
If it goes good, It might make you smile,
or else It was worth the try.

Naike

2009-05-17 11:28:31

Day 3,

~N

The most perfect girls are hard to find, but I just found mine.

She looks like an angel.
When she speaks, nothing is important.
If I just had you, My life would have an meaning..

I would walk the world for one like you, but there's no point…
You're one of a kind..
Eleven on a ten, if not even more.

But to be completely honest, you're more than just perfect..
You're an angel.

Girl, I <3 you.

Torrent of Flame

2009-05-17 13:44:22

Girl, I <3 you.


Change the '<3' to the word 'love'. I couldnt stop myself reading it as 'Girl, I less than 3 you.'

Floor66

2009-05-17 15:42:00

I agree with ToF. It takes away the beauty of a poem to fill it with `L33tSP33K`.

Naike

2009-05-17 17:54:31

<3 is no leetspeak?

If i could paint a one normaly i would, but it's in .txt

Naike

2009-05-18 11:00:34


~N

I'm going to do something really stupid..
If I don't I will get sad and I expect your support.
But I'm not sure if it's smart at all.
It will make more enemies than friends.
After all, if it turns out bad, it will be one hell of a month.


Didn't like this one as much, but it's still my feelings.

Nava2

2009-05-19 02:26:44

Try and keep a pentameter up. :)

Naike

2009-05-19 10:24:52

Day 5,

~N

Try to remember being three years old.
Life was so easy back then, unaware of what the future awaits.

The older you get, the more you learn and see.
When you think you got it all, you're not even close
There's always a new problem around the corner
that screws about everything up again.

So, with the facts in your hand
was it worth living as you did?
Do you want to change something?
To bad you can't rewind, but you can always start out from square one.

Naike

2009-05-20 09:32:48

Day 6,


~N

A perfect life doesn't exist, it's an illusion.
There will always be problems, big and small.
Annoying as they are, they always be there.

My problem is that i can't stop thinking..
Stop beliving that i still have a chance..

One chance to talk to you, and tell you how i feel.

mormonman

2009-05-20 10:31:33

ooo… I actually like that one :D

Naike

2009-05-21 12:47:56

Day 7,

~N

If i could write poetry then i would.
But face the fact, All I can do is say that I love you.