JPHamlett
2009-05-07 03:54:38
ok so i wrote a song for my band
it was oringinally a song about the metaphoic war between men and women for power but evoulved into this
BTW this is my first song ever so ya dont be nice be honest or i wont learn how to do it
just not to mean lol
its jsut a bunch of verses and a chorus right now no order in it
its not done yet more to come
it was oringinally a song about the metaphoic war between men and women for power but evoulved into this
BTW this is my first song ever so ya dont be nice be honest or i wont learn how to do it
just not to mean lol
its jsut a bunch of verses and a chorus right now no order in it
its not done yet more to come
VERSE
All the decision we make were not my own
You made them all without a thought about me
you make me feel like im alone
in the water with a boat and a paddle
but no partner in the saddle { not sure of this line}
VERSE
This must just be a bitter fate
I search you until i cnat no more
I search for love but only find hate
I know its there why must u hide it
But everytime i search it hurts me more
Chorus BETA
Its about time we end this
Or ill leave without saying goodbye
Don't chase me it wont work
I wont fall for your tricks
You were only a stick
Stuck in my side for to long { reword maybe}
So goodbye and so long