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ok so heres my verse that i need to fix up a little bit\


howe can we save the nation
if we forgot how to forgive
we have to pave
a better road for the next generation


can anytone think of a way to get lines 2 and 3 to rhymes at the last word

Do you type with your eyes shut?
I mean 'for4gto' :confused:

fixed

seems to work nicely as is…

From: Ruroken
seems to work nicely as is…

I <3 you :p

howe can we save the nation
if we forgot how to forgive
we have to pave
a better road for the next generation



without changing the ending this is a my quick version…



how can we save a nation
when the people have forgotten how to forgive
because forgiveness is our cement to pave
a better road for the next generation

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:spot: :p

From: Creed
howe can we save the nation
if we forgot how to forgive
we have to pave
a better road for the next generation



without changing the ending this is a my quick version…



how can we save a nation
when the people have forgotten how to forgive
because forgiveness is our cement to pave
a better road for the next generation

_________________________________________________
:spot: :p

u said without changing the neding whats your way with changingint he ending

How can we save the Nation,
If all we know is frustration?
Rebuild our foundations,
A better road for new generations.

A great site for getting rhymes; www.rhymezone.com

From: Torrent of Flame
How can we save the Nation,
If all we know is frustration?
Rebuild our foundations,
A better road for new generations.

A great site for getting rhymes; www.rhymezone.com

thts actually really good do u mind if i use that


edit

tht song got scratched so im makiing a new one called at worlds end its about how all the men r fighting with the woman

heres the first verse give me your thoughts

Take me around the bend
Where you said I should attend
A meeting meant to defend
Against the war at the worlds end