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Two Tone Poem


Smarter Child

2009-01-17 17:53:37

Well I made a Two Tone Poem and it is pathetic so i posted it under pathetic poetry:pIt doesn't have to rhyme:D//

         Part of me is glorious yellow-
lively and blissful
springy and bubbly,
Daring to do anything that heads my way.
On the inside I am something else,
mint green, like a lonely turtle-
jittery and anxious,
timid and wary,
expecting danger at every turn.
The best and the worst,
and yet they complete me!

Baked0420

2009-01-18 19:08:19

??? I don't think I quite get your poem, but uhh, good job I guees.

EvilChicken!

2009-01-19 10:55:26

I think that it actually is a good poem.

If that really is how you feel, then I might somewhat understand.


.. but why turtle? D:
Are they often lonely?

Smarter Child

2009-01-19 12:53:04

yeah "slow" people are lonely and :p this isn't about me it is describing a friend actually…

macknade

2009-03-21 19:00:33

randomness rules!!!!