SRL Archive - Graphics and Multimedia

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Its been quite a while since i've posted here. Hers a link to the latest thing ive done. Its all vector work done in Illustrator CS3. Also look at some of my other stuff on my DA profile.

Edit: If you are going to give comments, suggestions/criticism, please at least know what vector art is…

cool? what is it? o_o

…Its abstract art.

Its purpose is to be made as art. Its not same filtered banner or sig that you'd see on this forum normally.

yeah, abstract… personally i like abstract stuff to be kinda space-agy or bright viberant colors, this looks cool but i think of like Cold-War USSR when i see it…

With that; Im not sure that I like the 'dripping' effect on the bottom, and it looks like the fill on the dripping is kinda just like a cloud effect or something which I dont like that much. Also, the blue is really nice but the other colours are too neutral. On the left on the diagonal line, you have that nice light yellow colour which I think would compliment the blue really well. I like the lines coming out of the circles, but I dont like how they go into the centre, as I dont like the way they cross the effects in the middle.

Looking around your DA; Alot of it has the dripping stuff on them, but I think your best part by far is the "Crucible" one as the colours are really freaking amazing, although it looks too 'flat' on the page, with the background with the curvy wire type effects.

EDIT: I freaking love m6. Colours are amazing and its really vector and full of love.

From: Torrent of Flame
With that; Im not sure that I like the 'dripping' effect on the bottom, and it looks like the fill on the dripping is kinda just like a cloud effect or something which I dont like that much. Also, the blue is really nice but the other colours are too neutral. On the left on the diagonal line, you have that nice light yellow colour which I think would compliment the blue really well. I like the lines coming out of the circles, but I dont like how they go into the centre, as I dont like the way they cross the effects in the middle.

Looking around your DA; Alot of it has the dripping stuff on them, but I think your best part by far is the "Crucible" one as the colours are really freaking amazing, although it looks too 'flat' on the page, with the background with the curvy wire type effects.

EDIT: I freaking love m6. Colours are amazing and its really vector and full of love.

Thanks, I appreciate the constructive criticism. Every little bit helps me to improve. This one I tried to focus on hidden meanings behind each part of it more so than my others.

I agreed with Flame. The dripping/droopy effect is kinda distracting, I wouldn't fully take it away just make it less. Everything is really 'defined' in piece and that just is kind of a blob (in comparison).

You have some really great things on your DA page. m6 is pretty cool, and I really like the crucible desktop.

Just a simple critique, it seems asymmetric.

Oh wowzerz. A DA member that accepts constructive criticism ;)

I'm not really a "pro" at this kind of art or so, meaning I can't exactly critice that well, or I could but yeah…

Seems awesome anyhow, not sure how hard it was to make but I like the way it looks, except that I don't like the cloudy effect in all parts.