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Pikachu4

2008-08-06 11:56:20

some poem about bein rich =/

Everyone wants to make it to the top
No one wants to window shop
Everyone wants to be rich
Not stuck in the poverty ditch

Everyone's goal is the same
To gain cash and fame
Methods may vary
For the top has more than one key

Many may try
Doing so, many may die
But they'll be satisfied
In honor they died

..about racism

Racism is in the air
Using slurs with no care
Or consideration for others
Thinkin only of his same color brothers

Look at Kramer
What a fucking lamer
Using the N-word
Dumber than a fkin bird

Peeps be commitin hate crimes
Sayin Jews love pennies and dimes
I kno its a fact you be statin
But you ain't gotta be hatin

Peeps talk bout the Chinese
Sayin we neva got lower than B's
Damn right we all straight A
We don't skip, we stay

But there ain't no need to be racist
It only brings to your face a fist
Though racism may be humor
Let them know it a joke for sure

Shuttleu

2008-08-06 12:01:18

very good

did you think up of these on the spot or did you make them a while ago?

~shut

Pikachu4

2008-08-06 12:22:00

From: Shuttleu
very good

did you think up of these on the spot or did you make them a while ago?

~shut


Made them a while ago.

Heres one that I made during this post..

Sweat and blood covered the field
Heavier and heavier the sword I wield
Hope had seemed gone and sealed
Despair hit as another life was yielded

We had angered something beyond our might
Foolishly we shot it down from its flight
Visible only were that of his glaring red eyes in the night
Its fireballs able to melt even a rune kite

We intended to hunt the KBD
Although it seems that it is now hunting me
The dragon was as persistent as the sea
It seemed impossible to even flee

The dragon shot another fireball
It killed our friend wielding the granite maul
Loudly we screamed our battle call
Then suddenly we heard a fall

The dragon had been slain
The final blow was lain
not by us… the loot we did not gain
Our kill stolen.. our deaths in vain

Shuttleu

2008-08-06 12:24:09

From: Pikachu4
Made them a while ago.

Heres one that I made during this post..

Sweat and blood covered the field
Heavier and heavier the sword I wield
Hope had seemed gone and sealed
Despair hit as another life was yielded

We had angered something beyond our might
Foolishly we shot it down from its flight
Visible only were that of his glaring red eyes in the night
Its fireballs able to melt even a rune kite

We intended to hunt the KBD
Although it seems that it is now hunting me
The dragon was as persistent as the sea
It seemed impossible to even flee

The dragon shot another fireball
It killed our friend wielding the granite maul
Loudly we screamed our battle call
Then suddenly we heard a fall

The dragon had been slain
The final blow was lain
not by us… the loot we did not gain
Our kill stolen.. our deaths in vain

very good but it sounds like it should have a couple more lines to finish it off

~shut

Pikachu4

2008-08-06 18:22:17

I thought it was a fit ending :/

wired16

2008-08-06 18:32:25

on the third poem add
im stuck on my main
-with nothing but a d-chain

lol

Shuttleu

2008-08-06 19:02:45

From: wired16
on the third poem add
im stuck on my main
-with nothing but a d-chain

lol

yes that fits it nicely :)

~shut

Pikachu4

2008-08-06 22:17:09

but whats that gotta do with kbd hunting? =/

was supposed to be like.. very detailed but yet very vague