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Meh first poem posting in here.


thedemonic19

2008-04-11 07:56:02

ok i've got like 28 poems atm. Planning on making a book :) need 60 though:( will take foreva. well here is like the 6th 1 ive eva done.



I am not blind, I’ve seen what you’ve done
You have done what I have feared most.
No more shall I try, no more will I do.
You made your decision, now I’ll make mine.
I gave you my all, though it wasn’t much.
Now it is the ending for me.
My love is fading along with my tortured heart.
The beat slows and slows each time I have a thought of you.
Hope you have fund and goodbye.


woot lol hope u enjoyed.
I got a couple of really good ones

EvilChicken!

2008-04-11 08:07:01

Post them! It is good! Yah.

thedemonic19

2008-04-11 08:29:31

the more replies the more you get :) and ty

kevinlow

2008-04-14 23:57:27

keep posting!

StrikerX

2008-04-15 03:09:59

From: thedemonic19
u.
Hope you have fund and goodbye.


typo?

thedemonic19

2008-04-17 03:19:48

oops yea lol. not many posts lol. dont look like ull be getting many more

PvH

2008-04-17 10:28:35

whoah man
awsome poem:)
can you post more please^^
i like them
repp++ for you:D