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Ok this is my Tech assignment, i want to get a fucking A for once but i need your help to tell me if this is shit or good enough and please tell me what to fix :)

Testing Products
Cars -
The process of testing cars all starts from the car crash dummy test. The scientists first connect a cable to the car and hook it to the motor in the floor, Then they put the Crash Test dummy’s in the car and paint there forehead, knees and others parts that might have impact on during the crash. Before they start the test they connect the dummies to a computer which sends data of the crash. When the scientists have set everything up they start the test by pressing a button, when pressed the car starts to gain to a specified speed and hits into a large concrete wall, during the impact, high speed cameras monitor the crash, the longer the car takes to stop the less damage to the passages inside. The scientists also test the car on different terrains to see if the car can break on rough conditions and surfaces.

Toys –
Scientists need to test how reliable a toy is to a child. The scientist gets a toy (car) and drops the toy from a specified height, they make sure that no loose bits of plastic, rubber, metal gets breaks off the toy. An example is that a bit of plastic falls of the toy and hits the child in the eye or could land nearby and the child could grab and eat it and may not be aware that it could be harmful to swallow.

Mining Sites -
Scientists are worried that metals from the mining sites are getting into the nearby rivers and towns. The scientists test the local river water for any poisonous metals which could of escaped the mine, they also test the fish by cutting a piece of the fish out and sending it to the laboratory, they also test the citizens hair for any dangerous metals which could hurt the health of all the animals and humans around the village.

Pleaaaasse i want an A :(

It only needs to be a page and has 1.5 line thing in it. Also we had to watch a film and write 3 like type of things … yeah… and the film is from 1999 so its preety outdated shit.

It seems good, but maybe it's bit short(not my business, but just a thought)
You may get better mark if you add more items/places?

Cant be more then one page and it uses 1.5 lines thing is a must and the viedo doesnt say places and we only need 3 of those subheadin things. so yeah it only say about the products. TY for repying

Replace "village" with "town"? :p & is all of those things accurate(the testing w/ toys & how they do the mining?)?

DW i fixed and handed in got it checked by other people :)

But ty Jesus and Neegal for replying,