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love poems....i did these right after my break up...


Main

2008-01-06 04:06:31

orignal link is from my facebook http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=21104&id=508683841
it has some crappy copy right at the back, and if you serch it on google, you can prolly still find the background of the image (i've edited abit)

I did the black side and my bud alex did the other side (he was in love..)

This is the words if you can't see clearly (red-black)
I believe that love is___________I believe that love is

Long relationship______________Lies that hurt
Over due crush_______________Only few survive
Very caring__________________Very tough to get through
Ever lasting__________________Ever lasting pain (trust me…)

You'd never be happier_________Year's i've wasted on you
On the longest day of my life_____Ouch..the pain inside my heart
Undying love__________________Until the end of my life


i have an other one, but i need to ask my grade 8 teacher for it..

Jackrawl

2008-01-07 17:19:47

http://youtube.com/watch?v=d_zw3XHJR5k

Just joking. It's pretty good.

L3ss Than 33

2008-01-07 21:06:51

Decent for 8th grade. However, in a poem describing what one believes love is, I didn't like how Alex used the word "love" in the last line. How can "undying love" describe love?

Main

2008-01-09 16:34:52

i dunno why lol..

and this poem i did it in grade 9, the one where i did it in grade 8 are still in my teacher's computer, and i still can't contact her yet.

and also, these 2 poems, boost my english mark to 90%:rolleyes:

legendaryhero90

2008-01-10 18:45:53

http://youtube.com/watch?v=L3G70YlKlho

all i got to say…

Jackrawl

2008-01-11 22:06:24

From: legendaryhero90
http://youtube.com/watch?v=L3G70YlKlho

all i got to say…


I'm going to find out where you live.

R0b0t1

2008-01-12 00:03:28

Chuck Norris does not know love. He just knows not killing.