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Snow Day, Snow Day,
Have you ever seen a Snow Day?
Where skies are soft and leathery?
When morning looks like night?
When water is so feathery?
Is it water, is it ice?
Neither it is, for neither suffice,
For neither could ever satisfy,
The child's desire to watch it fly

A decent poem that most kids can relate to =]
The last couplet could be worded a bit better I think.

hehe,
dosn't rhyme to well, is that your own? :p

It rhymes fine… You just haven't got the rythm.
You just haven't got the beat.
You haven't been shown,
So get down and stomp 'yo feet.

Lol nice r0b0t

Haha I had a snow day the other day :) (check out new cyanide & happiness in sig :D)

I like your poem.

Peoms doen't have to rhyme.
Even though your does.

From: footballjds
hehe,
dosn't rhyme to well, is that your own? :p

Every other line

From: EvilChicken
I like your poem.

Peoms doen't have to rhyme.
Even though your does.

Thanks =D

From: R0b0t1
It rhymes fine… You just haven't got the rythm.
You just haven't got the beat.
You haven't been shown,
So get down and stomp 'yo feet.

lol

From: Hobbit
Lol nice r0b0t

Haha I had a snow day the other day :) (check out new cyanide & happiness in sig :D)

Nice, but I bet you didn't get a snow day on the First Day of Christmas? ( I call it a snow day because relatives were coming)

I'm meaning snow day as in no school, but I had snow on christmas :) not in the morning but it started snowing in the afternoon

From: Hobbit
I'm meaning snow day as in no school, but I had snow on christmas :) not in the morning but it started snowing in the afternoon

Dang, not bad.

Yeah, Snow Day is kinda vague. Most of the time it means 'Vacation from Hell,' which is either your Aunts being delayed a day or school board closing school.