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This poem is from school from when my teacher (Ms. Moore) wasn't verry good with keeping the room under control.

Should I compare her class 
to a day in hell?
I try to pass
but distraction is all that I can spell.
I try to stay immune 
to the dumb things they say
will this class end soon?
I hear the insults fag and gay
our poor teacher is so upset.
I can tell this class is a headache
she deserves an "I'm sorry" basket
but i do not have the materials to make
the students in her class treat her like spit.
We're all very lucky that she doesn't quit.

Of course I got a 100 and she told me that I was "brave" with some of the words I wrote on my paper.:duh:

How old are you? You spelt hear wrong, this isnt very 100% worthy , sorry to say, but it isnt.

It didn't rhyme…:(

i am 14(but i was 13 at the time) and it's not supposed to completely rhyme because it's called a sonnet poem the patern goes like this.

a
b
a
b
c
d
c
d
e
f
e
f
g
g

you see?

I try to stay immune c
d
will this class end soon? c?

I can tell this class is a headache f
but i do not have the materials to make f?

spit & quit dont rhyme

they dont rhyme into the form but nice try.

im-mune, sune (how it sounds)

head-ake, m-ake

sp-it, kw-it

….



o btw i think this kid has a crush on his teach

jeez give him a break, I think it's pretty cool.

actualy quite a good poem

From: kaustav_002
It didn't rhyme…:(

Poems don't have to rhyme. Look at all the great poets… there are multitudes of different styles.